Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Involved in exercising activities has been widely acknowledge as the most optimal method for people want to lead a healthy lifestyle. Along with this, some people hold the belief that it is more beneficial for players to engage in group sport while others are in favour of solo sports activities. From my personal standpoint, both types bear their own merits and demerits.
Considering the advantages of team sports, it is undeniable that players can develop a variety of interpersonal skills when playing together with others. That is to say in order for a team to run smoothly and efficiently, not only players should learn how to cooperate with their teammates but they also need to possess excellent communication and teamwork ability. Besides, team sports can make a great contribution to people’s social circle in the long run. Should acquaintances take part in a football match, they will have the opportunity to naturally strengthen the bond between co-workers, which will be advantageous for them in the workplace.
In terms of individual games, there are numerous reasons account for those taking side with this viewpoint. First and foremost, players in this games are more likely to develop independence since they have no one to rely on for support during the game and have to carry out everything on their own. As a consequence, solo players will achieve a strong physical health and a tough mind during the process of trying to figuring things out alone. Secondly, individual games also means that people will pay all of the attention on themselves, hence, not only their confidence but also their self-esteem will be increased. Some prime example for this are chess players or runner - those have the highest self-esteem among athletes, which is proved by scientists in a recent research.
In a nutshell, I would content that every sports has their own positive points and a combination of these two would be the most advantageous for human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09259259259 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80904035078 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7359245282 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180933688954 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609389786549 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469999694064 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104470437435 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386163571907 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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