Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Playing any kind of outdoor sports is relaxing for body and mind though each person might have own preference and views in terms of choosing group games like football, cricket and/or individual sports activities like swimming, long jumps.
Some people would consider group game is more helpful as it includes socializing and helps each team members to learn how to communicate in group. It certainly creates empathy and tolerance towards each other.
But at the opposite side, some people prefers individual sports as it allows more freedom to work on individual preference.
In my opinion, I would vote for group sports as it allows everyone to compete and enjoy the fun together.
Although, sports if interesting activity, it can cause accident if you are not conscious. Therefore group sports and individual sports both needs to be done with proper safety measurements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to group'
Suggestion: to group
...eference and views in terms of choosing group games like football, cricket and/or ind...
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Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ause accident if you are not conscious. Therefore group sports and individual sports both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 141.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27659574468 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64876289463 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.821609678 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265311633206 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109362681636 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673320278111 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136463199382 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602993535992 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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