Sports have always been a remedy for not only our mental, but also physical health. Although some people insisted that sports involving teamwork is of crucial benefit, that of individually-oriented sport rages among others.
On the one hand, team sports are propitious to some extent. First of all, as a team consists of fellow participants, who have the same purpose and passion, they are set to take care of, support and instruct one another. Thus, players tend to establish a sense of motivation as well as brotherhood. Secondly, extreme cooperation effectively takes advantage of each member’s strength and compensate for the weak. In other words, cooperative sports are designed to make everyone feel they are a part of something grand.
On the other hand, solo sports provide such unexpected perks. Firstly, as the training takes day by day, lone participants achieve a sense of triumph of winning the old selves of their own. Since progress makes perfect, they are proud for each accomplishment they make on the long haul. Another point worth mentioning is freedom. No commitment is to make, players are allowed to be in a mood of relaxation. Moreover, this is, in some ways, are favourable for their self-esteem; due to not having to carry the pressure of judgements.
In conclusion, no matter which form of sports people decide to incline themselves in, the gratuity of both is as equal.
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 85
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion 66
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08189655172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97314763623 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7227842985 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2142857143 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196446178603 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592882161964 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555391379616 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120933644159 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340329365474 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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