Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
These days the importance of career versus family is debatable. It is often argued that people should spend extra time to develop a successful career path while others have a contradictory viewpoint that they should devote time with kith and kin. Although I agree with the statement that people should pay attention to build a successful professional career, I think friends and family are also important and should be given equal time.
To start with, there are two logical reasons why people should devote time to build a fruitful career. Firstly, these days inflation rate is becoming increasingly high, and blue-collar workers won’t be able to manage the day-to-day expenses within limited wages. Therefore, people should pay full attention to build a successful career, so they will get an executive job with handsome remuneration to pay the household’s expenses easily. It is often claimed, such as, that 80% of people working at an executive level are facing a fewer financial crisis because of their dedication to building a successful career, as a result, their income level is higher which enables them to deal with the financial burden. Secondly, pursuing a successful career gives an opportunity to help other people without any interest. For instance, a senior executive could refer a profile of a person in his organization.
On the other hand, family and friend times also offered benefits for people. The prime advantage is that people should go out and spend their leisure time with family members as it will build a strong family bond between them which is important to become a happy family. In addition to that, friend plays an important role in our lives as they could come forward to rescue you in difficult times; therefore, people ought to visit them very often to make this relationship stronger.
In conclusion, I am of the view that although a successful career provides a platform to earn hefty amount to manage financial obligation, I presume friend and family times are also important as both are long term relationship which gives emotion support in a difficult time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...build a fruitful career. Firstly, these days inflation rate is becoming increasingly...
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Line 15, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...mes are also important as both are long term relationship which gives emotion suppor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13832853026 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74483536912 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5653529783 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324957654109 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120591187257 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797849738055 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215919563467 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778720883251 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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