Being surrounded by honest and reliable friends is one of the blessings of life. While it is commonly believed that having companions with a similar mindset is preferable, others argue that to have a network of friends who have different viewpoints is more beneficial. I am of the view that it is entirely dependent on the age group of the individuals rather generalization.
Generally speaking, youngsters tend to crave to have a variety of opinions of others, particularly friends, in their decision-making process. Considering the limited exposure and less experience of challenging situations in life, the young generation value those who not only challenge their decision but also share their sincere perspective on any particular matter. This immensely helps the person in taking the right course of action because there is a lot to learn from the experiences of close acquaintances. For instance, I really admire the advice of one of my best friends on opposing my decision to study engineering as he thought that accounting and finance would be the best choice from me because of my outstanding arithmetic skills.
However, aged individuals prefer to have a friend circle having the same point of view as them. As people grow older, their mindset becomes rigid and they consider themselves self-righteous. In other words, they reach a level of maturity where they detest a situation in which their viewpoint is challenged by their colleagues or acquaintances. Consequently, it is best suited for them to have a group of friends who have more in common and share similar interests in order to have a healthy relationship between them.
To conclude, friendship with like-minded or unlike-minded is entirely dependent on the age group. While mature people loath disagreements, youth admire those who disagree with them and provide a different perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, really, so, while, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27516778523 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14715011541 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2038324976 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283407520885 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957835909691 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962336720021 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172742703621 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762131447498 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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