Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban center. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
People have some concern about giant manufacturing corporations which placed in cities. They thought these corporations make some severe issues for communities and need to transfer from big cities to those areas that are not harmful to peoples. I agree that it has more positives than negatives, but some problems need to solve it.
To begin with the positives, a significant advantage that it transfers from city to out of the town helps reduce pollution. These huge manufacturing companies have enormous wastage during the production in kind of gases and hard water, which is harmful to human lives. Wast of these factories are also extremely risky for wildlife. Besides reducing pollution, it also helps decrease noise due to the fact these production units are in working twenty-four hours and seven days cause of the noise, and mostly it is disturbing people at night during sleeping.
On the other hand, a number of severe problems need attention before shifting to another place. These large factories need a significant number of people in terms of skilled labor that is not available around that area. Transportation is also a problem for the workforce that comes from cities to run these corporations. People waste the During the traveling from houses to workplace. For instance, a worker spends two hours to get to his workplace it means they waste ten hours in a week that is equal to a workday. Governments build rapid and eco-friendly transportation.
In conclusion, transfer these industries from urban areas to out of city solve a plethora of problems like pollution, loud noise and increase the number of birds, however before moving out-of-town need to solve transportation problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17689530686 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8690164617 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4717644354 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117118196971 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400548398936 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314627993921 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732410683026 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174663190559 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.