It is believed by some people that men are genetically more competitive than women. I strongly disagree with that opinion because nowadays women usually more prominent in running their tasks at many sectors such as job, political, and education.
Firstly, in the professional life, various big companies have recently lead by female leaders that successfully bring their corporations to the better management and more satisfied profit. Additionally in political sectors, in both developed and developing countries, the more woman parliamentarian now lead many areas of issue to be solved. Why is this happened? It is analyzed that the women leaders are believed to have more patience and consideration in making the decisions. Beside, they are more likely to have flexibility in understanding their employee. Hence, this phenomenon support the fact that women do not leaved behind men to be a leader or committing big responsibilities.
Secondly, in the area of education, some studies reveal that the majority of highest score students in class were female. Beside that, in extracurricular activities, many research results also stated that female students frequently reported to be the champion in many competitions compared to male. The reason behind this fact is that female pupils have more focus and multitasking skill while male students commonly easier to be distracted when they studying. Therefore, it is strengthen the fact that female are also competitive.
In conclusion, although men and women have different capacity in doing their activity and tasks, the endurance and skill of women could not be underestimated. Female naturally also have competitive manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...r management and more satisfied profit. Additionally in political sectors, in both developed...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...ed when they studying. Therefore, it is strengthen the fact that female are also competiti...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...naturally also have competitive manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54651162791 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09816023458 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.488454642 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227033133159 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858999187639 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108054977715 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158699676236 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931419346241 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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