None can deny that happiness is the essence of our life. While some people think that happiness can be bought by money, few others think that the happiness obtained by money will not last permanently. In my opinion, happiness is not only achieved by money but with other chief things also. Using examples from all around the world, this argument will be proven.
First of all, it is worth considering that we get immense pleasure in our life during our childhood days which is even before money was introduced to us. For instance, when I was a child, I felt excited on seeing my grandparents and my friends. Eventually, money doesn’t play a key part in this situation and they are mainly used to get things which are materialistic. Thus, it is evident that money is only for our temporary needs and doesn’t really count on our happiness.
In the same vein, the true happiness is when we achieve something great because of our countless efforts and dedication. For example, a disabled person who had won an Olympic medal may feel immensely happy which cannot be bought by any currency. Similarly, the joyfulness of any person can be accomplished by good health that he possesses, love and affection shared by others which will last forever. Because of these reasons, it proves that there are various keys to happiness, those are not dependent on money.
To sum up, even though money is required for our day to day livelihood, indeed it is not a precursor to happiness. I strongly feel that there are other criteria’s that are stronger than the money to accelerate the happiness in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ed by money but with other chief things also. Using examples from all around the wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72788312723 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8230560683 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180931945465 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682500798061 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604627305042 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118317731981 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958094340402 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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