Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
happiness is a sense of well-being.money is considered by many people to be one of the most important contributing factors towards happiness.This essay examines relation between the money and happiness.
To begin with,money makes the world go round and fullfills the needs of individuals.To satisfy the fundamental needs such as food, shelter and clothing, people need money.many people turn to crimes because they have no money to meet even their basic needs. people who have plenty of money achieve many things that others cannot even hope for.So money is the vital role of persons happy life.
one way that people can gain happiness is through their work.For instance,a nurse doing hardwork in hospital may have very little money but the reward of helping people and doing the job they are good at, bring happiness in itself.In other words, happiness can be found by using skills that people are trained for and enough job satisfaction.
Another factor influencing happiness is having supportive and loving people in life.while money may bring the opportunities to enjoy pleasures, few people would enjoy them on their own.Being surrounded by a loving and caring family is considering by most people to be more valuable than any amount of money. happiness can be seen in every aspects of life.For instance,a newborn baby smile gives happiness to parents,a child standing first in class gives happiness to their family, first drop of the rain provides pleasure to the farmer.There are lot of examples which causes happiness.
In conclusion, I believe that the money give everything which are needed today but it can never provide the inner soul peace satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18888888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77699001175 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1754410614 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.142857143 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5714285714 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433762686925 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208894726814 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925670145882 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242619166677 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983437250784 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.