Many of us hold an opinion that the intention of museum is to amuse people. However, others think it helps to grow ones knowledge. This essay will discuss both the sides of argument in detail, before declaring any position.
Firstly, few of us may argue that the main purpose of museum is to please and cheer Its visitors. For illustration, the Dolls museum in Delhi have displayed the dolls of more than 150 nations. These dolls are dressed in respective traditional attire to show ones own history and culture. This approach makes the clear understanding of the heritage of any country. Also it makes easy to visualise the historical background of any place around the globe. Such a well-structured museum incites more number of visitors. Hence, the merits of his opinion are easy to support.
However, if he sole purpose of the museum is to educate Its explorer then it may get monotonous after certain extent. For instance, the Watson museum in Rajkot, it had ample of coins, sculptures and various art pieces to show, all of these are 500 years old. But it does not exhibit and explain it's usage and purpose behind Its creation. Also, each section has literature written about it. This approach may not interest everyone visiting the museum. Therefore, the benefits of museum that focus on educating may not be always preferred to visit.
After looking at different points of view, I reckon that museums better serve the purpose of entertaining as opposed to educating. I hope that the museums of future would be arranged accordingly, to serve Its primary intention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94360902256 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62883046589 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9204289244 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0555555556 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236703284705 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666644530903 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043588487882 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141174770863 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223952215347 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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