Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowdays, with the increase of problems in our society, the analisys of how our children should be teaching is a subject of much debate. Some people argue that the education to be a good member of society should be teach in the school. Although, many valves and principies are learned at home being teaching for our parents and family. Both arguments will be analysed before I draw a conclusion.
On one hand, the education and formation that children receive at home is part essential in their life, because, home is the place in where their spent most time. Thus, as instance values like not steal and good modals are those that only they might learn at home. However, the education in the school plays an important role to keep the good formation in children.
On the othe hand, It is necessary that children keep going to school in order to intensify the education that they receive at home. Whiout this education is easier that their behaviour tends to be badly. A good example is the poor children that it can seen in the streets and that many times their lives end in the jail. However, equally the school education should be support for parents at home.
After considering both points of view it is my opinion that for create a good members of society both parents and school education play a factor important to achieve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'taught'?
Suggestion: taught
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...xample is the poor children that it can seen in the streets and that many times thei...
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Message: Did you mean 'supported'?
Suggestion: supported
... equally the school education should be support for parents at home. After consider...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'member'?
Suggestion: member
...it is my opinion that for create a good members of society both parents and school educ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267441860465 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.143410852713 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0658914728682 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0271317829457 0.0501214627716 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0581395348837 0.0437548338989 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.158914728682 0.122226691241 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0348837209302 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35505943473 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0232558139535 0.0326793684256 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112403100775 0.0861772015684 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.021408717616 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0077519379845 0.011925033212 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1341.0 1933.35771543 69% => OK
No of words: 236.0 316.048096192 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68220338983 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317796610169 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237288135593 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156779661017 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0889830508475 0.137316102897 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35505943473 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.037074148 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.0699259886 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1335680743 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.814263465372 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 43.395480226 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.01694915254 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438198531064 0.332605444948 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119952012177 0.102741220458 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118930513984 0.0668466124924 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.577771124016 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200861444448 0.148594505496 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189405815642 0.134430193775 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950234457431 0.0742795772207 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35163465633 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.156798635542 0.0638462369009 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300203686475 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508775689749 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.