Some people think that people every nation should concentrate on agriculture to develop. Others think that other developments are more important.
What is your opinion?
It has been noticed in the recent times that farming land in being converted into the industrial areas. There is a school of thought who advocates agriculture, but others believe industrialization or development is more important. I believe, both are essential and there should be a balance amongst both sectors.
It is being argued that more focus should be paid for promoting agricultural production. As the population of the world in growing at the fast pace, it is the need of time to have increased food production. Moreover, it has been witnessed that many farming lands are being converted to housing societies and big factories. So, to cater the requirements of food, it is high time to perform research and invent more advanced ways to increase the production out of farming land. It is also essentials for economic growth of the people associated with agricultural activities.
On the contrary, it is stated that countries should priorities modern ways of living. Industrialization has proved to huge source of providing employement opputunities. Moreover, infrastruction developments like roads, parks and modern living houses have made life of people more easier. Futhermore, technologies like mobile, internet have totally transformed world into a global village. It is the time to more ahead in the right direction, which is to move forward with the growing world and utilize our energies in the modern developments.
In my opinion, there is no denial with the transformation of world and to cope up with the needs of modern era, we should be focusing on new ways of development. However, I believe this transformation has also increase the need to pay more attention to agriculture sector. It is not possible to live without food and it is important for health to have natural food available to fullfil the needs of our body.
In the conclusion, I would say that nations should adapt the new ways of living and focus on new developments. However, for the growing population, it is essential to keep the focus on agriculture sector as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... living houses have made life of people more easier. Futhermore, technologies like mobile, ...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
... I believe this transformation has also increase the need to pay more attention to agric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09734513274 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10112145127 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510324483776 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8478329372 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152973183263 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465598972421 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492243641819 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820399476737 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171899190865 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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