Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family.
Do you think money is important factor when choosing a job?\
What other factors should be considered ?
In twenty first century, having a wealthy income is an essential requirement for every individual. It is helpful to secure coming years, organizing own business and to accomplish all opulent desires but friendly and hardworking staff, working hours, benefits offered and opportunities for growth are also an important factors should be considered before hunting a job. I will shed light on significant factors in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, future happiness is based on some dreams which are only full fill with money therefore pupils working round the clock to secure their coming decades .In addition to it, lavish wedding and lifestyle are compel human being to earn six digits wages. In the tech-savvy world, number of people wants to become entrepreneur, therefore firstly they seek a well paid job to earn money in order to start their own business in future.
On the other side, healthy physical and mental state is far predominant then wealth therefore job seeker should select their working place which has healthy environment with friendly staff to achieve success in their work. Moreover, time interval of the job should be suitable for them because working continually will call a hazardous diseases like obesity, high blood pressure and poor vision. An astonishing bonus and chance to enhance their working skills in the corporation are also root factors should be considered before finding a new job. For instance, prominent businessman Steven Paul Jobs, founder of well known mobile company Apple, started working at an organization as a technician after few years he become a famous entrepreneur.
To conclude this, high pay scale is an important key to provide security for their family but healthy mind and body, chance to get higher position and team work is also significant things to keep in a mind before hunting a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17218543046 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65368791662 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632450331126 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2704584855 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.2 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300563350857 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112374413357 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572568667751 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170240240704 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232303042896 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.