In modern competitive epoach, most of folks beleive that above 60 employee should be retired from their work because they enhance the chances of gigantics obstacles. My essay discuss both views and opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
Confabulating the statement, there are numerous reason why not be allowed to work after 60. First and foremost, old people cannot do heavy work because they donot have enough energy nevertheless seneior worker have less efficiency to do any work. Secondly, if the authority set retirement age is 60 and youngsters also eligible for apply jobs in different fields. Moreover, the elder employee's behaviour also change according to their age limit and they becomr more dominate in their services. Most of old masses donot familier with new technology so they donot work on it. For instance, in this era all the organisation work with the help of computer,laptop and other gadgets.
On the other hand, there are also have some arguments why job is important for older persons after 60. Firstly, seneior have enormous valuable experience in any field which held to earn more profit and also enhance organisation's name and fame in the globe. To add to it, if old worker do job in any field they easily fullfilled their needs and requriments with the help of salary.
At last, I opine that no doubt, the approach of a particular retirement age of 60 is commonly seen in almost every country yet the seneior workers can be given opportunities if they are physically and mentally fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the folks') or simply say ''most folks''.
Suggestion: most of the folks; most folks
In modern competitive epoach, most of folks beleive that above 60 employee should b...
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Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
Suggestion: employees
...ch, most of folks beleive that above 60 employee should be retired from their work becau...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...n different fields. Moreover, the elder employees behaviour also change according to thei...
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , laptop
...anisation work with the help of computer,laptop and other gadgets. On the other han...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
.... On the other hand, there are also have some arguments why job is important for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98031496063 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69722969917 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8025508674 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152451494484 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530296702213 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476147120681 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841911776814 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393835374851 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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