Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Even though every job has a sense of purpose and can make a difference, certain vocations such as being a politician, or a scientist definitely have the most impact on the world. It has been a contentious issue whether a politician or a scientist aces this competition. This essay will gingerly analyse the influential abilities of both them and will argue why scientists overshadow political leaders markedly.
Political leaders, on the one hand, can stimulate national movements which can reshape the entire globe. Usually, eminent politicians have a huge number of followers who share the same kind of ideology that makes a politician so influential. Either it was Mahatma Gandhi or Nelson Mandela, for instance, they both transformed the radically with their set of principles, stimulating nation-wide movements and a great number of followers to incessantly keeping the revolution alive. If political figures can bring such tremendous change among nations, undoubtedly, they have the greatest impact on the world.
On the other hand, I and many others still believe that scientists are the most influential. A scientist with unorthodox thinking and persistent can not only change one nation but can bring a drastic improvement in the whole world. For example, who can forget the painstaking 1000 abortive attempts of Thomas Edison without whose persistent the globe might still be living under darkness. Moreover, most of the amenities that we cherish today;
electrical appliances, aeroplanes, cars to name but a few, are a result of constant determination and experimentation of these brilliant minds. Therefore, others and I strongly feel that scientists have been and will have the most influence around the world.
To conclude, even though politicians can persuade great movements in their native countries, a scientist’s light bulb have the potential to eradicate abysmal darkness from the world. Owing to such exceptional contribution, scientist, in my opinion, are the most influential intellectuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10044428536 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2338001789 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227758186933 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081009074251 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071817770758 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127134879136 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339198431227 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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