Some people think that the purpose of TV news programs is to entertain viewers. Others believe that news programs should be educational and informative. What do you think the purpose of TV news programs is? Support your opinion with reasons and examples.
It is true that there are a plethora of TV channel and TV programs for watching. Some people opine that the coming programs should be relaxed, whereas others argue that it should be educational and informative. I think both criteria are important to be included.
On the one hand, people are busy on their working life nowadays, when they arrive home after an exhausting day, they tend to watch some relaxing, funny and mindness TV programs to release the numerous stress from work. Perhaps, my husband would be a good example, the first thing he do when he comes back home, is to turn on the TV and watch the interesting TV programs for a while, he feels that he can escape from a real life and his mind was refreshed after that.
On the other hand, I believe that the educational TV programs are essential, especially for children and teenagers. It is because kids and teenagers are spend more time on watching TV every day, the positive and enthusiastic messages can be developed effectively to them through the educational TV programs. Thus, the positive mind and good personality can be constructed easily also. Moreover, children and teenagers can wider their knowledge through different kinds of informative TV programs, such as discovery channel, historial programs, cultural programs.
In conclusion, I do think that the entertain TV programs and educational and informative TV programs are both vital to our daily life to suit different audience. Different TV programs have their value to survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey arrive home after an exhausting day, they tend to watch some relaxing, funny ...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...d be a good example, the first thing he do when he comes back home, is to turn on ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...s. It is because kids and teenagers are spend more time on watching TV every day, the...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...d personality can be constructed easily also. Moreover, children and teenagers can ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ams. In conclusion, I do think that the entertain TV programs and educational and informa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01984126984 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79228355342 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8823474318 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326289873266 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146325428081 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880914962037 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232793567675 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934490929171 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.