Some people think that strict punishments for driving offence are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Due to rapid increase in road accidents, some people believes that strict rules and regulations with severe punishment should be implemented to overcome this issue, and is becoming increasingly controversial. While some believes that fear of severe action will deter people to drive more responsibly, other thinks that merely a fine will work. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth and why strict actions will give more propitious result then paying some token of money.
People driving recklessly and flouting traffic rules are main reasons of traffic accidents. Government should introduce the policy of zero tolerance for such crime perpetuators. There is a need of amending the laws to create fear and avoid any road injury. For example, In India, every year, 1, 00,000 people lose their lives in hit-and-run cases. However, after introducing a jail for 6 months in drunk and driving cases; the overall accident rate has plummeted. So, there is urgent requirement to have strict punishment including jail provisioning for not following traffic rules.
Those opposed to this says that we need to be more humane and follow “Gandhi” ideology to punishing traffic offenders. There is an argument of giving a second chance and time to follow traffic rules from next time. They believe that traffic police should work to convince with reasons, instead of creating an environment of fear. Police is for safety of people, and not to browbeat them. For instance, Saudi Arabia government initiated a traffic program to teach drivers about safety measure. So, actions need to be taken from awareness side.
In conclusion, it is debatable, if strict punishment is only solution to avoid any traffic mishaps or policy maker need to be more reliant for giving a second chance to offenders. In my opinion, we should have a strict policy and action in place to averse any accident.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15806451613 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72627214957 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4428323555 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0588235294 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295817553806 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849359647623 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499181075875 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171409179223 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447104253674 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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