Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay insurance in your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain.Why you are writing to them

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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay insurance in your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain.
Why you are writing to them
Why do you think the insurance should not be increased
What do you want them to do

<p style="white-space: normal;">Dear Sir or madam,</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding email received from your company towards <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-72758CA1EDAC1467DB07B2A3627B98C2" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="an increase~the increase" data-pwa-dictionary-word="increase" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">increase</pwa> in insurance amount.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Let me explain in more detail. I have bought insurance for my car from your esteemed organization and policy number is XYZ12345.<br>I have took <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-960A475C5119FF7D03C8259AFD3F9C37" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="an insurance~the insurance" data-pwa-dictionary-word="insurance" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">insurance</pwa> of yearly basis as it was within my budget compared to other competitive insurance schemes. Recently, I received email stating that I have to pay additional 500 rupees on a monthly basis.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I believe there should not be <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C0510218995D80089F672D46C2414B56" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a hike~the hike" data-pwa-dictionary-word="hike" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">hike</pwa> in insurance costs, as I have paid <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C5E9109CDB45B7EB76E3F17E84C6F797" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a yearly~the yearly" data-pwa-dictionary-word="yearly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">yearly</pwa> fee while buying insurance. Also, it <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FC11D3546BA47E6705CC7D4AC8529099" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is clearly mentioned" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is clearly mentioned</pwa> in the contract that there will not be any additional charges during this tenure.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I suggest you not to charge any additional costs in the current policy but <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-570960CC57E1877094CD87B0685E1598" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3095" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="rather " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">rather&nbsp;</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DA439AFFCB9AFB48629A09EBB4A9D811" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="an increase~the increase" data-pwa-dictionary-word="increase" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">increase</pwa> in price when someone is buying <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CE1532E37F4C0690E77492FABDC0769B" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a new~the new" data-pwa-dictionary-word="new" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">new</pwa> policy or at the time of renewal. I would also like to inform you that sudden increase in policy amount will affect your loyal customers.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I hope you will look into this matter and revert me with your positive response.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Yours faithfully,<br>Tim</p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...e-space: normal;'>Dear Sir or madam,

^^
Line 1, column 774, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...nd policy number is XYZ12345.
I have took
^^^^
Line 1, column 4173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...te-space: normal;'>Yours faithfully,
Tim

^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, regarding, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3884.0 937.175257732 414% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 12.903654485 4.54256449028 284% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.7551205784 2.54303337028 541% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 184.0 127.690721649 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1038.6 290.88556701 357% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.5 1.41237113402 248% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 16.3608247423 306% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 435.654584122 44.8134815571 972% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 647.333333333 76.5299724578 846% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.1666666667 16.8248392259 298% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0437814154648 0.216113520407 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657076230631 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650058111685 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437814154648 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.4 8.37731958763 769% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -140.01 70.7449484536 -198% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 26.0 3.82989690722 679% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.2 7.45979381443 606% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 58.43 8.71597938144 670% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.52 7.59969072165 152% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 41.2886597938 249% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 8.54432989691 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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