Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
It is widely recognized that success has closely correlation with human intelligence. While I admit that success could be an important measurement for intelligence, I believe that it cannot outweigh the importance of other factors which contribute to the measurement progress.
Some people argue that success is the key to evaluate the intellectual ability of a human being. Those CEOS such as Bill gates, Larry Page, Elon Musk who have the most brilliant human brains are the most successful and popular person in this planet. Barack Obama, Susan Collins and those other senators served or are serving in the congress have the ability to give the most powerful speech, convincing and persuasive. The elites from different fields are the perfect examples to illustrate the undeniable link between success and intelligence. Therefore, These people would like to believe that in order to be proved as an intelligent human, first you need to be a person with power or money.
In spite of the claims above, I strongly support that intelligence could be evaluated in a variety of ways other than success alone. one of the best characteristics is self-control, a trait most people wonder to have but cannot attain. With this character, a person have better consistency and ability to execute plans which outplays the majority of opponents in any competitions. Furthermore, humbleness is also the main reason for many people well-known for their intelligence. Albert Jonson, a famous physics scientist, for example, ascribed all his extraordinary achievements to the support of his co-workers and students instead of himself. If his is arrogant, he would not humbly refer to the study of those others before him.
In conclusion, there are some examples of persons who are of both success and intelligence. However, there is no evidence to imply the absolute link between them, and with proved evidence, other characters such as self-control and humbleness are also significant to value human intelligence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...riety of ways other than success alone. one of the best characteristics is self-con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99371737978 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9187696918 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268763796044 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862191461982 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066674711982 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172067643883 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642493266756 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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