Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
Agree/Disagree?
Over the past many years, intelligence concept has been relying on the shoulders of successful people. Although, the majority of people think that success decides whether the person is bright or not, some people consider numerous ways on which intelligence can be discussed. As far as my viewpoint is concerned, I denounce with the statement because people have several opportunities to showcase their brilliant mind.
Firstly, everyone has different and impeccable qualities to show the intelligence. It is valid to state that people start revealing their intellect mind at an initial stage. To illustrate, someone might be good at arts, but not in studies. It does not mean that the other person is not intelligent. Therefore, each and every opportunity is a need of the hour.
Secondly, behaviour indicates whether the person sounds bright or not. The recent research indicates how prestigious people have low self control over the anger management. For instance, Donald Trump is successful, but famous for his arrogant behaviour. However, a brilliant mind knows how to tackle the situation without harming anyone. Thus, it is right to state that behaviour decides the intelligence among people.
On the contrary, there have been some thoughts that success defines the intelligence. This is because of the impression created by a society. However, I would retaliate it by saying that it is a myth. In order to be a smart person, everyone must understand their own aspects. So, individual personality plays a vital role in day to day life.
To conclude, success is not a correct approach to calculate someone's intelligence. It not only includes behaviour, but also plethora of opportunities to showcase someone's great mind. It would be better if we will remove success factor to consider anyone's intelligence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29655172414 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96069375165 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.265720257 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8095238095 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197377394274 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456799388518 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664524647191 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969220019353 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766429006035 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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