Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities.
Many are of the opinion that teenage is the happiest time of one's life whilst other consider adulthood more pleasant, even though it comes with burdensome responsibilities. But in my view, though teenage is a tensionless period of time everybody can enjoy in life, mature life helps bring the most out of happiness and prosperity.
One of the main reasons, some consider adolescent ages as the most amusing period of time is because of the freedom they enjoy and considerably lesser or lack of life-borne pressure they are prone to, compared with the later stage of life. Teenagers, for instance, are supposed only to studying new subjects and learning new skills, and hence clearly deprived of the tensions of running a family and earning the bread and butter. Secondly, during these years youngsters are graced with an ardent mind and flexible body, which in turn make them equally competitive and lively to manifest their skills and make life more vivid and memorable.
On the other hand, adulthood is the only time period in life where we are under total control of ourselves. This is well exemplified by the fact that particularly the adult earns for the family and this helps him to make decisions on behalf of the family and also for himself. In other words, dreams of life come true only when one becomes mature enough. Additionally, the life learnings and experiences make an adult more composed and contained than a naive brain. Obviously, this places mature steps ahead when it comes to problem-solving and business ventures that eventually lead to success and happiness.
To summarize, in my view, people used to be amusing and enthusiastic during teenage years, however, only a mature mind can make and execute well poised and apropos decisions that will bring smiles to faces.
- The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with is to introduce physical education lessons in the school curriculum 78
- Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more problems or more benefits? 61
- Technological developments in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people than recent technological developments have brought Do you agree or disagree 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65550999496 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9784547065 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224565728495 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809547425924 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615943064067 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134286683354 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705089143036 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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