It is said that adolescence is the most happiest era for some people. However, other believe adult ages play this role for them, although they have to shoulder myriad responsibilities. Both sides of this debate will be argued before a preference choice is shared.
In one camp, it is believed that teenage years are the most carefree period that everyone experience while teenagers only are asked about their grades at school. However, the other side of this coin is that they do not have enough authority to make their own decisions. For instance, I remember when I was 15 years old, my friends and I decided to go for an adventure trip at north region of our country in summer holidays. In spite of my severe persistence, my parents did not let me experience that just because of safety issues. Now, whenever, I am told about teenage years I provoke this awful memory. At that time, I wished I were an adult to be able to make my own decision. As this example shows, lack of authority shed light on happiness that provides by carefree manner of being a teenager.
On the other hand, one of the most prominent feature of being an adult is monetary independence which is offered to people through working. But, due to the fact they have many responsibilities priorities needs is inevitable. That means not only they have to work hard but also should apply an appropriate money management method. For example, this year is the third one that I have decided to buy an apple watch for myself but I have not manage to do that yet. Since there are many more urgent things in need of spending money on. According to this, being an adult and keep feeling happy is a controversy issue.
All in all, after discussing both sides of this debate, I believe being an adult despite a vast majority of responsibilities and difficulties which is brings whit it, is the most happiest period of life. It is hoped people will be able to enjoy their golden time even in difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
It is said that adolescence is the most happiest era for some people. However, other bel...
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Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
It is said that adolescence is the most happiest era for some people. However, other bel...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...n apple watch for myself but I have not manage to do that yet. Since there are many mo...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f but I have not manage to do that yet. Since there are many more urgent things in ne...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...culties which is brings whit it, is the most happiest period of life. It is hoped people will...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...culties which is brings whit it, is the most happiest period of life. It is hoped people will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62571428571 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64887962454 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565714285714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4576957616 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9444444444 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168501595969 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524053070137 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417849165411 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110715107599 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335626795387 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.