Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everybody has a lot of good memories associated with their adolescent age. however, some controversy begins that adulthood brings greater joy, along with responsibility and accountability. The thought process of the essay will discuss both the views and opinion will be stated in conclusion.
The most prominent point in support of the childhood happiness is that there is a limitation of anxiety and stress level, which is very minimal on the contrary with the adults because children spend ample time on playing and chatting with their friends. Secondly, the life of a young child is restricted to themselves because they have family support to take care of important matters, and they don’t need to worry about it. Lastly, teenagers are showered with love from near and dear ones and it makes them special feel in the world. For example, research conducted by Oxford University that a person can spend their cheerful time and create sweet memories for their life in their early age.
On the other hand, adulthood comes with a lot of sacrifices and hardship and a person can gain a lot of things in their life, which brings a smile on their face for a shorter period. Moreover, in addition to adulthood, they have the freedom to shape their future according to their own preferences. Furthermore, parents tend to find happiness in their children, which is turn on attaining success in their life and make them feel proud in society. For example, a research study shows that maturity gives you greater confidence in your judgement and all areas of life.
In conclusion, although a person can attain joyful memories in young days and a later period. however, childhood memories are always overwhelming with the happiest moments in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01030927835 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6638531585 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0293877656 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118460844222 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441827626906 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338645885134 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733884218094 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273467262407 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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