Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, Teenage years are becoming quite challenging for most of children and the incoming generation. Adding to this, the great variation between ways they have been raised compared to their mates which might be conflicting and arising struggle. Also, dealing with rival pressure, fearing of academic and social failure, and trying to cope with over-producing stress.
The question raising here is; whether if our teenage years have been the best time periods of our life with all its whites and darks or the adult life is the best among, and in order to answer this substantial matter, we got to disclose all the aspects of each one.
Starting with the teenager life, which some of us consider as their preferable time periods, where they had no responsibilities or even weights on. As, all it could matter since then is, how we can spend more time outside the bed, gaming, gathering with colleges for an outing, claiming illness in order to skip a school day, or even complaining of mom’s food. While, mature life is completely different and irrelevant to the mentioned one, where mindset becomes more mature and adult. Adding to this, the ability of working out your own issues without any assistance or requesting help from others, taking more responsibilities and punching above the weight.
Collectively, we could never neglect the fact that mature life is amazing and full of magnificent memories that is hardly erased or replaced, but adult life is more is of great interest as it is an extent for how much we can bear and fight solemnly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
...ears are becoming quite challenging for most of children and the incoming generation. Adding to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95801526718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64609267063 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641221374046 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3737023648 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133546601369 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543080770981 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333385474967 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762258723662 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270070961432 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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