some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
discuss both views and give your opinion
Although plethora of people tend to believe that being a teenager is the most joyful period of life; however, others think that adult life despite all its great responsibilities, still brings more happiness. In my opinion I will go with the second belief.
Embarking upon the first perspective, the teenage years brings a lot of happiness for different reasons. Most importantly, the absence of all forms of responsibilities. As a teenager you do not think of anything other than yourself and your own pleasure. Not to mention, being well-taken care of by your parents and knowing that whatever happens they always got your back. Moreover, this period of one's life has the highest peak of energy, enthusiasm and excitement to try different things and exotic activities that bring so much amusement. Besides, the pleasure of the exposure to the surroundings with a more grown-up mentality after being a small child thinking only of simple toys.
On the other hand, the second opinion is based mainly on the maturity and general stability of life after being an adult. The feeling of having a complete control over your life, and having no one affecting your decisions is really amazing. Moreover, getting involved in the work life, building a career and thinking of developing your future has its own pleasure. Despite the responsibilities and sometimes the uncertainity about some decisions, but it pays off after achieving your goals. Furthermore, building a family brings a lot of happiness.
In conclusion. although adult life has many responsibilities however, I still believe it is more enjoyable and brings more happiness than teenage life.
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22471910112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96002913896 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6568288216 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339165049118 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969366536919 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766406905321 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213297944386 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582088595917 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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