Some people think that teenagers who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adult criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, due to increase in technology we can do many things on our fingertips; Instead of utilizing them for future advancement, most of the youngsters are misusing and being into juvenile crimes. On the other hand, many argue that adolescents should not be accused to severe punishment equal to adults. I Agree with this statement and will be discussing below.
Despite the fact, a criminal might be a teenager or adult the crime made by them cannot be overridden; moreover, the victim is being suffered by the mistake done by the offender. Further to this, there are many unlawful acts are being committed by minors such as, murders, molestation, theft, smuggling and many others. The laws for the adolescent criminal should become strict enough equal to adults which will bring seriousness in society not to attempt them again. For instance, there was a recent molestation act happen in one of the major cities which is convicted by minor and was not sentenced to death equally with adults as he is still 15-year old. I this regard, the accused got saved and the law is in favor of him which is not at all to be encouraged.
Accordingly, the impact of cinema, action/fiction related games and acts related to illegal activities is being portrayed as heroism and the youngsters are being influenced by them. In fact, parents need to give counselling to their children in every aspect of their career and lead the in a right path. In order control the crime rate of juvenile’s the law should be harsh enough.
To conclusion, even there are several reasons for each crime; on the contrary, the punishments for the adults and young need to implement neutrally. I strongly believe that imposing serious penalties for all the crimes at all ages is compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, moreover, so, still, for instance, in fact, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75434807774 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4800684206 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166571682095 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606370585536 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397880779819 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954996125294 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266933266908 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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