It is a fact of concern that criminal activities by adult or adolescents are increasing at an alarming rate day-by-day. But there is a confliction in people about there punishment will be the same or different based on their age. In the following discussion, I am going to describe my own perception.
Although the law should be equal for everyone, we also keep some matter which forces someone to commit a crime, especially into adolescents. For example, some drug dealers used children as media for dealing drug. They were actually unconscious about their work because of their lack of knowledge about the bad effect of drugs. In Zimbabwe, many children associated with taking and selling drugs, many of them didn't know the bad effect of inhaling drugs or it's a crime for which they could be punished. Apart from, being highly dependent on drugs, sometimes their leader encouraged them to do robbery, theft and sometimes murder. It means an improper environment sometimes advocates adolescents to do such law-breaking activities.
In addition, poverty also plays a significant role in this kind of activity. As they were from a destitute family, they didn't get a proper education and easily persuaded by someone for money. Most of the teenager commit such criminal activities for food, clothes or similar kinds of stuff. Sometimes their parents force them to work because of their awful condition. That's why lawbreakers hire children with a small amount of money in spite of having knowledge about the result.
It is true that everyone should be punished for their offense. But, it needs to be varied in terms of the above circumstances. I believe that the punishment of a crime is not only executed based on what they did but also who and why they did. So, adult or adolescent should be punished according to their age.
- Some people argue that if children behave badly , their parents should accept responsibility and also be punished for the behaviour of their children . Do you agree or disagree ?? 61
- Some people think that teenagers who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adult criminals To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
- Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant s criminal record This protects the person who is being accused of the crime Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, apart from, for example, in addition, kind of, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99344262295 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73493331776 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4842498235 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6111111111 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156971524046 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484795524754 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046282226516 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942170436944 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046498311795 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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