Some people think that there will be decrease in international travel in future .Do you think the less amount of international travel is a positive or negative development?
It is clear that online shopping is gaining popularity. While there are many disadvantages to buying online, there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, and showcase believe that the benefits override the drawbacks.
The internet shopping can be a big threat to the physical stores.This is because, people might stop visiting stores in the coming future and choose to buy things on the internet. To illustrate this, there are many local shops that sell groceries and books are already on the verge of closing.So Furthermore, some sellers might not even have required skills and capability to facilitate online buyers for their product. As a result, these stores can run out of money and eventually have to shut down.
Online shopping saves time and money which are two most significant things about it. The reason behind this is many consumers can buy things like books for reading and flight tickets from home which do not requires traveling. For instance, these days, online websites facilitate taking orders and delivering the products straight to buyers home. In addition, these websites have multiple deals and promotions to capture consumers attention. One example of this is the waving off, of the delivery charges. Therefore, saving of time and money are attracting people towards online shopping and increasing its popularity.
In conclusion, while buying online might create serious problems to local sellers, it can be considered cheaper and saves times which has attracted has been attracting people. In my opinion there are more advantages than disadvantages to buying online.
- You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing, express concern a 73
- Some people think that there will be decrease in international travel in future Do you think the less amount of international travel is a positive or negative development 61
- These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- Buying things on the Internet such as books air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Smacking Children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...f travelers. For instance, every flight comprises of five-person cabin-crew staff and almost...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 325, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ly affect us mentally and economically. Therefore it will be a negative development.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29432624113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97984823409 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0830865161 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187066623026 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624793426303 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552298891237 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105785826048 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415757933516 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.