Some people think that tourism benefits the host country. Others think that tourism causes problems for the host country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
part of people think that tourism has many benefits to the host country.While others think that tourism does harm to the host country.I will discuss this idea in both views to make it clear.
On the one hand, the economy of many countries benefits from income which tourism produces.For instance,governments can use money which is paid by tourism to see historic buildings to conserve those things.Secondly,because of the increasing opportunities of both visitors and hosts for learning about others countries. For example,more and more people are attracted with the beauty and the culture of one country in the Internet and they want to see and know more about it in reality.Thirdly,traveling has educational advantages for individual tourists such as explore new things,learn about the tradition,history,..of which the place they visit.
On the other hand, many tourist destinations are faced with the damage of human such as Victoria Falls,The Acropolis,...Secondly,the high amount of travelers come to visit lead to environment pollution.For instance,part of visitors are litter,draw on walls,smoking,step on grass,..out of control.In my opinion, governments must impose heavy fines to offenders and visitors should take responsibility for their actions to protect environment and also tourist destinations.
To sum up,although tourism has both positive and negative things,we cannot deny that tourism helps us to widen our knowledge a lot therefore we can know more about the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62666666667 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00887903423 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.879562476 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.2 106.682146367 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.2 7.06120827912 399% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303745923316 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168549028085 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132078231515 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184120286838 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136343147807 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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