Some people think that uniforms in school is unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Since long, uniforms in school is a topic of discussion among people. A section of people opines that dress code in educational institutes is not required; however, I am in complete disagreement with their opinion. This essay highlights the facts closely.
There are countless benefits of having a uniform in the school. To begin with, a sense of discipline inculcates in students as they get dressed up as school etiquettes. Secondly, a dress code abolishes social differences among pupils. Evidently, due to globalization and urbanization, nowadays, every education center has children coming from different regions, having varied cultures as well as from vivid economic background. Ergo, uniforms act as a social leveler in schools and reduces the gap between the rich and the poor students.
Furthermore, the dress code plays a significant role in security aspects. Management and security persons could easily identify an entry of any miscreants on the school premises. Additionally, tutees that often bunk off the class could be easily identified based on the school uniform. In other words, wearing the uniform acts as a deterrent for truants for being caught by family members or else. What is more, such type of setting is cost-effective for parents because much investment is not required on clothing through out the year.
Conversely, people support a uniform ban in schools with a viewpoint that it snatches students' right to freedom of expression. Studies have ascertained that an individual gains more confidence and can express his individuality more effectively when dressed up according to his dressing style or culture. However, this could be dealt with by fixing one day in a week for students to wear their choice of dressing.
In conclusion, there are numerous merits of school uniforms. As the advantages of implementing school uniforms outweigh the disadvantages, it should be a norm for teaching institutes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... investment is not required on clothing through out the year. Conversely, people support...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35947712418 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00997246056 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3882228435 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157110896404 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504904494585 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411473795689 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915557022843 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221759829608 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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