Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you
agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people spend their leisure time in watching sports, which many believe that it is waste of time. In my view, I agree to this thought, by watching games will enable people to become lazy, causes several illnesses and could be used to learn other important skills for seeking better career opportunities.
Firstly, youngsters spend their leisure time by watching their interested games such as cricket and football. At times, they are spending more than 2 to 3 hours in a same place, causes them to become lazy and lose their agility. For instance, my friend's kid watches football during his school vacation time, and he became too lazy where he is unable to do basic needs instead relying on his parents. Such situation could be avoided if children actively take part in games instead watching sports through television.
Secondly, it has been observed that people who spend their leisure time watching games become obese. Several researches say that youngsters eat more while seeing games, and gaining more weight. Most importantly, they are prone diabetes and losing eye vision at young age due to continuous watching of sports channels. Furthermore, more children look out of shape which might affect their physic to a great extent.
Finally, people will not able to learn the games skill, when watching the sports. To master any games youngsters should take part actively to learn various rules and techniques, which cannot be engrossed if they watch the games through television. Moreover, sportsman ship is an eccentric skill needs could be learned only playing the games and not only seeing it.
In conclusion, People of all ages should not spend their leisure time by watching sports in television, instead they should wisely utilize their time to learn important skills to shape their career. Additionally, they should participate in various games to be inn shape and also help them to learn various protocols of the game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'games'' or 'game's'?
Suggestion: games'; game's
...ally, people will not able to learn the games skill, when watching the sports. To mas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12852664577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4605614549 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557993730408 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0798537693 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.066666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228116845857 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908452107689 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950105945715 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147204186764 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555776706855 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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