Every country has its own culture and custom. A section of the society claim that people should adopt the different cultures and practices of the country where theyare travelling. In my opinion travelers should respect and fallow other nation custums with out forgetting their own culture.
To begin with, folks get benefits when they adapt local culture traveling place. Firstly, they can easily mingle with the local flocks. Which leads to get help by local people if it is indispensable. For instance, people will respect forienersif they willing to. Fallow their own culture and ready to help them.secondly, to adopt the travel destination culture avoid some dangerous situation and protect traveler to some sort of craim.for instance, for India wearing a short dress felt by some people awkward and these can lead in some rural areas harras the travelers and rape we noticed. Thus versatile of the different cultures is very important to the travelers.
Adapting of different culture must fallowed by
travelers. One of the reason is that People learn more about the host country through the following of their costumes. It will enhance their ability to adjust the different conditions. I agree that travelers must adapt the host country tradition and custom but they shouldn't forget their own culture.
To conclude, versatile of traveler is plays a crucial role when they are in host country, to fallow their tradition will help you to learn about the different cultures as well all as escape some problem while in the host country, along with other culture adaptions peoples should not forget their own culture.
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first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25161290323 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56564998266 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 84.2866947601 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312757389166 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119169393147 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588232389026 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222926835084 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641601491537 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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