some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
These days, people have becoming more concerned about successful career in the life. The question is, is this good idea?
To start with, there are a number of benefits of successful career in the journey of life. First, it gives an individual to satisfaction, money and status. This means that an individual can get respect in the society. Secondly, people can fulfill their desire by earning plenty of money. For example, people can achieve luxuries such as going for a world tour, buying a luxuries home and car and many more. Finally, all these things invites satisfaction and happiness into one’s life and they feel proud.
However, there are several disadvantages also. One issue is that to successful career required more dedication and involvement which can lead to poor health and imbalance work life. Take for an example of professionals who are working till late evening hours in the corporate. This also leads to communication gap in personal life as they invest more time to become successful. Another concern is people feel more stressed and pressurized. This means day by day health of an individual gets devastating. The numbers of patients increasing is a good example of this.
In conclusion, although successful professional life is an important things to improve the quality of life nowadys, but it will have impact also. Therefore, despite of known problems and issues, I am strongly believe that success in career plays an vital role to make an individual’s life premium.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'luxuries'' or 'luxury's'?
Suggestion: luxuries'; luxury's
...uch as going for a world tour, buying a luxuries home and car and many more. Finally, al...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...owever, there are several disadvantages also. One issue is that to successful career...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...ssful professional life is an important things to improve the quality of life nowadys,...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...f life nowadys, but it will have impact also. Therefore, despite of known problems a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...known problems and issues, I am strongly believe that success in career plays an ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...own problems and issues, I am strongly believe that success in career plays an vital r...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y believe that success in career plays an vital role to make an individual's...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15447154472 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85820636845 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0721806583 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5882352941 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257777042515 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783272398504 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801331314234 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176302294501 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377089636549 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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