Some people think that young people should follow older people’s examples while others think it is good for young people to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some Individuals holds the debate that, should young generation follow the path of older people's or they should challenge them with their new ideas and creative thoughts? Although, I support that new generation should be given chance to prove themselves.
Firstly, I would like to discuss about the benefits that the youth can get from older ones. Experience is considered as the best teacher in the world, so older people knows the loopholes of many problems and how to deal with them in different situations, they can guide the youngsters in many such situations of life. Elderly's have the treasure of knowledge and experience which they have gathered in their lifetime. Young generation should surely take advantage of it.
Secondly, the young generation is the key to the development of any country. In this world of globalization, it is very important to have young generation coming up with new ideas of development in every sector of country. So youngsters should be given full freedom to generate new concepts and explore all the verticals, which will benefit the whole human race for illustration we can consider innovation in medical field which has helped enormous number of patients,, many diseases are now curable which were out of human reach before i.e hear attack, cancer, kidney transplantation, and so on.
In conclusion, I would like to say that elderly experience is important but countering the old ideas will bring change, so challenging the older ways is immense importance, which will create new ways for bright future and healthy lifestyle of the coming generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7976532854 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.030716786 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154697896269 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657184100207 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671855955904 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102225551561 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641764302723 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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