Some people think that youngsters should leave their home while others think that it is better to stay at home as far as they can.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Teenagers play an important role when it comes to social developments. Whilst some people are of the belief that youngsters should have their houses, others have a diverse view that they should stay with their parents. I am of the view that youth should spend at the family home a long time as they can. In this essay, both perspectives along with my opinion will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
On one hand, independence of youth at the early time of their life has an important role when it comes to personality growth. Not only does it assist them to choose their future but also it improves their interpersonal skills. In other words, Youth will have the chance to depend on themselves. For instance, in2017, an article has been published by the Economist showed that 70% of youngsters, who leave the family house at 18 years, they have the knowledge and interpersonal skills rather than others. Hence, it is imperative to help the future generation to leave their home at an early age; this teaches them how they can depend on themselves.
On the other hand, Parents have an indispensable role in youth’s behavior. In other words, teenagers should stay under the supervision of mothers and fathers until they finish tertiary education. In addition, if there is no supervision for youngsters on this age, they would face some hazards, which affect their future, such as drags addiction. Besides, they may acquire alien’s ideas. For example, according to a survey has been done by the World Health Organization showed that 75% from youth who leave their home at early age intake drags. Thus, the future generation should stay under supervision of their guardians till they finish university education.
In conclusion, after the above- mentioned ideas has manifested and showed both perspectives of leaving home of Youth. I would like to restate my opinion that Adult should stay as they can on their family house; they will safe them from some dangerous, and it create a good personality growth.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...l safe them from some dangerous, and it create a good personality growth.
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd it create a good personality growth.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00295857988 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67936449235 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4872307032 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314761677318 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10176897198 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727567598989 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218793645585 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554354189359 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...l safe them from some dangerous, and it create a good personality growth.
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd it create a good personality growth.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00295857988 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67936449235 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523668639053 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4872307032 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314761677318 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10176897198 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727567598989 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218793645585 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554354189359 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.