some people think that zoos are cruel and that zoo should be closed, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people are of the opinion that zoo are inhuman and need to be banned forever In order to conserved extinct wildlife while others find that zoos can provide a sanctuary for endangered animals and should be kept open. In my opinion, it is an urgent need to ban zoos that ill-treat wildlife for their own profitable organization.
On the one hand, many people think that zoos can be unsuitable habitats for wildlife animals therefore, they must be abolished. Some people consider zoos to be cruel environment where the zoo owner camouflage their cruelty with conservation claim. Wild animals supposed to be remain free in their natural habitats as in the zoos they are forced to breed or entertain the crowd, due to which they fall sick. Several wild creatures, who stay at these artificial environments do not behave like their usual counterparts. To illustrate, polar bear can hardly walk for 5 meters when kept in cage whereas in their Artic home they roam for hundreds of kilometers.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe that, zoos provide safe place to rehabilitate potentially lost species. Man-made activities such as construction of factory premises by cutting down forests and hunting make wildlife not safe place to live. Many animals in zoos are well treated and live longer than they would in the wild. For instance, Project Tiger in India assist to conserve our national animal. Besides this, breeding programs are also practiced at zoos in order to save the endangered species.
Talking everything into account, some people believe that zoo are inhuman and need to be shut down, others think that wildlife sanctuaries are the perfect place to conserve endangered animals. However, in my view point, zoo need to treat wildlife with better care and stop manhandling them for entertainment purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 658, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e they roam for hundreds of kilometers. On the other hand, there are some people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08580858086 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62243983522 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7959073478 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366198864997 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132196180324 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105586237829 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241253212999 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485163261132 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.