Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and love. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, exchange of gifts has become a trend, consider as token of love. Peoples find out reason to offer some gift to their near ones on various times of calibration. Some individuals believe that gifts contribute vital role to show their love and affection to dear ones but some opine that there are various other ways which show take care of their kith and kins.
To begin with, some people think that gifts are imperative thing that convey the message of love to their friends and relatives. They feel that these are tangible things that persistently remind that someone care about them. To illustrate, that people living in overseas usually give ornaments and gifts to their dear ones to show their love and affection.
Moreover, some youngsters give luxurious items to their friends and family. They believe that more the expensive present and more the stronger bond among themselves. Actually busy life promotes the gift of culture of gifts; people have no much time to spend with near and dear ones so they feel guilty .They offer gifts to them to compensate the feeling of guilt. For instance, especially working parents to overcome the inability to spend the quality time with children, they shower the gifts in form of toys and video games.
I believe that there are various ways other than gifts. They have limited shelf life and it can never be the expression of love. The best gift to your dear ones is helping them in difficult situation. For example, when a person suffers from health issue give him moral support and time as a gift. It is best present for a person if someone stands by us in difficult time.
To summarize, gifts sometimes shows love and care for long distance relationship but these things are short lived, instead sharing quality time and helping them when they need is best way to show love and care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
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Line 13, column 301, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ty time and helping them when they need is best way to show love and care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83699059561 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27252620449 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5879505903 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220276638735 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781978761296 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578091812956 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143488189726 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522612388108 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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