Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A number of psychologists believe that people to overcome their stress of every day affairs need to do nothing a portion of a day. However, it appears that this idea cannot be completely correct. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, according to people's experiences, when they are workless, they cannot avoid thinking about the sources of stress. This is because, they are able to focus on their problems due to the sufficient time they have to check all aspects of their issues while they do anything. As a result, it makes us suffer from a high level of stress. In addition, a second and perhaps most significant and negative impact of this method is to miss a part of life's opportunities which can be used in order to take effective actions. For instance, in the modern life which is full of stress, individuals should spend their time to search for easier remedies to solve their problems to be safe from the sources of anxiety. Although there are a lot of reasons for stress of every day life these days, overcoming them is easier than the past thanks to the technological improvements. Thus,people should not miss their opportunities by doing nothing.
It is true that the tiredness would be the primary source of stress and people need to be relaxed and free of stress in a portion of a day to refresh themselves. Despite this,today's life is like a competition. If individuals miss their opportunities because of tiredness, they wont have any chance to improve as much as they wish.
To conclude, this method to reduce the stress may not be effective. It seems to me that it could not help people not only to get opportunities but also to overcome the stress of everyday life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73063973064 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75867115222 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5698833298 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199344107656 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697048043128 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675636145742 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132975428476 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331781675781 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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