Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised.
To wha textent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, human live much longer, than they did approximately 30 or 40 years ago. In this case majority of people claim, that the age of retirement should be raised dramatically. However, at the same time, people say that the age of retirement should not be changed, because there are several types of people. In this essay I will discuss both sides of this argument.
Firstly, there are some people who like their works and want to continue it, even they are over 60 years old. So, in this case the age of retirement should be raised. First of all, human live much longer, because of the high level of medicine and it is more available nowadays. And there are several types of people who are physically gifted and can do many physical activities despite of their age. In this case, the age of retirement should be extended.
On the other hand, not all the people possess the same health conditions, and this type of human can become ill very early. They can die early, because they can’t have conditions to do any work. They need relax at the end of their life.
To conclude it all, I’m definitely sure, that the age of retirement should not be raise because of many reasons, which I have mentioned above. However, the type of human, who are physically gifted should be allowed to work until they will fizzle out.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.181481481481 0.247107183377 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.155555555556 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0703703703704 0.0946595960268 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0740740740741 0.0501214627716 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0518518518519 0.0437548338989 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0296296296296 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33944358031 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148148148148 0.0326793684256 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0037037037037 0.00163938923432 226% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0851851851852 0.0861772015684 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0407407407407 0.021408717616 190% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0148148148148 0.011925033212 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1368.0 1933.35771543 71% => OK
No of words: 236.0 316.048096192 75% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79661016949 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279661016949 0.374742101984 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186440677966 0.28420135186 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122881355932 0.203846283523 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0805084745763 0.137316102897 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33944358031 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.037074148 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 49.6568212885 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8571428571 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3545394298 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 35.5012106538 49.1944974215 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.22368421053 1.69124875643 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303282522752 0.332605444948 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101349254646 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0951622165615 0.0668466124924 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550350616912 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134583165216 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131413301202 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723196806634 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359621916891 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122110072719 0.0638462369009 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214873238128 0.228012699653 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505085762214 0.058150111329 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9