Traffic problem is increasing from the past years. The government should take action to build new roads in metro cities. This essay will argue why there is a need for building of new roads in metro cities is the right solution or not. Let us discuss about the same.
Its true, traffic is increasing every day with increasing population. Government should take action to build new road network to reduce traffic as per increase in demand of vehicles. Last year, construction of yamuna expressway in India has reduced traffic. Additionally, the proposal should be made to construct more highways as per the demand of vehicles. It has resulted in more demand of building new infrastructure as per traffic situation.
However, construction of road is not a gud solution to the traffic problem. Roads are constructed by cutting the forest and require investment. It results in wastage of water, burning of plastic material, increase in dust which effects the life of many people with the pollution. Last year, building of barapullah in Delhi made the life of the people hell. Smog of burnt waste material spoiled the life of nearby people. Additionally, government should push the people to use more public transport. Recently, Delhi government has started odd even scheme to reduce air polution. It has resulted in 10 per cent decrease in pollution and traffic. These actions can be taken by government to enforce people to reduce traffic on roads.
In my opinion, both views are correct. In some situation it is necessary to build roads like in urban cities where road condition is very bad. Its a government job to decide whether construction is required or not. More road building is also waste of fund if no body use it. I agree with both the views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ities where road condition is very bad. Its a government job to decide whether cons...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
... road building is also waste of fund if no body use it. I agree with both the views. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99663299663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70108808408 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4805608103 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5217391304 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9130434783 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5652173913 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20150563844 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581328488358 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474043146017 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134049914448 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369177802134 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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