Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level.
Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, the children are the tender buds of the society owing to which how they should be raised has invariably been crucial issue across the globe. Major section of people tend to vocalise that extra-curricular subjects are as imperative as other subjects. This essay adamantly asserts that above phenomenon paves the path for comprehensive development along with conductive in marginalising the stress level.
Since, the holistic growth of youngsters can not be overlooked therefore co-scholistic periods should be made complusory and negligence at any ground is not justifiable. Seemingly, when children are exposed to such activities they unravel the hidden abilities consequently, with continous practice they perform exceptionally well in particular terrains. Moreover, proficieny with passage of time support them to excercise their pragmatic skills in real world at lateral stage of life. To site an exemple, renowned spanish painter Pablo Picasso had profound interest in painting since his school days which assisted him to become a professional artist of the century.
Even though the endowing educational curriculm is undeniable prime responsibilty of any institution but it is also accountable for inflicting pressure on children. This is because introduction of difficult subjects in formative years cause burden on small shoulders and certainly students feel exhausted. Furthermore, young minds are supposed to be taught in strain-free environment where they could imbibe interpersonal values and enable to pay attention towards their academic . To exemplify, research of UNESCO stating that some schools are emphasisng on arts content in initial years of study which depicted that academic results were outstanding of those institutions.
To conclude, maintaining adequate balance in scholistic as well as in co-curricular activities keeps the interest of tutees centralised which is directly associated with their overall flourishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88111888112 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18524457474 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713286713287 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2388589282 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794068828295 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263950532357 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294718121029 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398844333885 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02422005744 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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