In recent period reading newspapers and watching television news has been common activities in modern human's life. But there is contention significantly, some people's are agreed with this statement; whereas, other have the conflicting views.Here in the below essay I will try to enunciate this fact with my own perception.
As far as I am concerned that reading newspapers and watching TV is not wasting of time rather it has much better benefits for people's everyday life. For example: People's can learn such as good things from newspaper, like as how to stay in healthy life, how to use modern technology, how to love or treat each other, how to fight against the evil. In other hand by watching TV news we can acknowledge all around the world condition easily, able to serve fantastic tips about the relation with each others. Even though there is some disadvantages like, sometime newspaper has been published fake news or some time short of valueless article with meaningless word. Moreover,some TV channel also broadcasting unhelpful news or sometime there is political issues they telecast which is wrong unexpectedly. However, there is still advantage.
In addition, there is some more direct connection with people's daily lives by reading newspaper and watching TV news. Firstly, living as a member of competition planet we must need to be updated to compete with each other,otherwise, it's gonna be hard to get a good opportunity. For example: Developing country people's are not that much reader than developed country, as a result they can't compete with them in internationally.Secondly, people's are always been the reason for environment pollution, just as air, water and other related contamination. Human's also cause's for deforestation.So television has been given the advantage by broadcasting news about the awareness of pollution, though People's can be aware by watching TV. Thirdly,loneliness has been getting peak problem in modern human's life markedly,so reading newspapers or watching television can be reduce the problem.
To recapitulate,reading newspaper's and watching TV news habit might be great advantage for people's life. So everybody should grab this benefit and start to make habit in everyday life's.
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...this benefit and start to make habit in everyday lifes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17672413793 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78222324786 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4474539923 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300377483226 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12762153861 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106476348725 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181720359883 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374155564533 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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