Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of and give your own opinion.
People are divided in their opinion about marrying for love or money. In this day and age conjugating process is totally changed as compared to past time. I Oppose the view of Marry for money and my reason will be explained in the following paragraph. From my perspective replace crucial part in understanding each other more wisely as compared to money.
Let us take a look on importance of love . First of all fondness is the prime factor which can change the views of families during the bonding of two different cultures of customs at marriage ceremonies. For instance, a famous Bollywood movie half girlfriend shows epic love story of two culture and religion.
Secondly, love between couples work like a glue to connect each other and even some time it does not see the color, race, cast. A famous quote describes that love can happen any time at any place.
On the other hand, money is also the necessity of current generation even people marry for wealth instead of love. They think opulence plays vital role in their life . For example, Melanie Trump married Donald Trump for affluence and to live lavish lifestyle which makes with her different from others.
To repeat in short, I thought love is wiser than money during marriage celebrity and money can fulfill your dreams only but not your feelings and emotions. Furthermore if I am not wrong love has more weight-age than money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, even so, for example, for instance, in short, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84166666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43177517393 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658333333333 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.624744897 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266354881506 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891386579665 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08089455118 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134757300501 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636572037546 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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