Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the internet or books.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In these days for getting information people have a lot of ways, some people believe that they can gather new data from other people who had some experience about the certain topic, while others think differently. They think that internet and books are made for sharing data and experience of all people in all the world. This essay will shed some light on this argument and extend my partial support to the former view before arriving at conclusion.
Humans follow new things in their life and try to experience good and bad things, and also they expend their life for gathering this kind of guidance, hence they are really worthily. Young people can use old people advice instead of try some new things and by this method they can gather more information during their life. Getting data, more over, have deep effect when it is achieved by face to face conversation. It sits on people mind like story or remembrance, so they never forgot these advice. Not only can we aware of many poor accidents when we confer with experienced individuals, but also we can get some solution for these issues.
On the other hand, new generation believe that they can find everything on internet. I mean that, they are depended to internet and it is their everything. They search on internet or books for finding answers for their questions or problems. Good books may play a role of loyal friends in people’s life. They can communicate strong relationship with book, furthermore, are always available and they have a lot of solution for any subjects. In reality owing to extensive idea on internet or books people can get numerous advice for just one subject and can analyze their issue from a lot of sides.
At the conclusion, in my opinion, nothing can take a place of people experience. Because people spend their time and life to reach it and they feel them with their all cells, they are reality, so young generation should get guidance and counsel from their older to find a best line in their life way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advice' or 'these advices'?
Suggestion: this advice; these advices
...ry or remembrance, so they never forgot these advice. Not only can we aware of many poor acc...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ce and counsel from their older to find a best line in their life way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, so, while, i mean, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76217765043 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44951320502 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52435530086 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6513624543 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205356829021 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729041097542 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747955311249 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135524272736 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550551664501 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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