Having someone around to back you up with loads of pieces of advice is a boon in disguise! Some people go for advice to the elderly experienced people or someone who they consider to be their agony aunt while others start burying their heads into books or internet to grab the relevant information. The suggestion coming directly from humans are better associated with the current scenario. This essay shall discuss both the views with my personal opinion to conclude with.
Firstly, let us look into advice coming from humans. Whatever the situation is, getting guidance from a person who knows us personally and is aware of our background is way far more welcomed than some dummy gadgets. It has been observed that we generally tend to get counseling from people who have either actually dealt with our situation at some point in their lives or the ones who have seen others deal with it. As such, real-time experience can be more close to us psychologically. So, the person mentoring us can not only give us advice but can prove to be our partner in going through the phase of distress.
On the other hand, In today's world of globalization internet or books are being seen as real Encyclopedias. As the internet is available in almost all parts of the world and many people are having easy access to it, it makes it easier for individuals who shy away from disclosing themselves in front of other people. Books are considered to be the best friends of educated people. With numerous search engines and e-books available on the internet and so many people compiling their experiences into books, we can have any scenario being looked up for advice from them. Having access to the internet and books can save your time in getting advice and keeping it private in comparison to approaching people who can at times be vulnerable.
Finally, to conclude with, in my opinion, although it is easy to get advice from the Internet or Books easily at our convenience, it is better to look up for someone whom we consider to be close to for advice. As real-time verbal talks are way far more fruitful than the virtual ones.
- You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.1)thank you your friend for the holiday2)explain that you left your wallet in their house3)give them instruction of how to send back to yo 56
- Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ay shall discuss both the views with my personal opinion to conclude with. Firstly, let us lo...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... we consider to be close to for advice. As real-time verbal talks are way far more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, look, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74594594595 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55135135135 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9436484868 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28554671037 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096623501253 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451759163407 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176557181947 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027674957591 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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