Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern society, it is argued that formal education and school attendance is unnecessary by the reason that the Internet has a variety of materials for different subject and children are able to study it from home. I totally disagree with this opinion because it cannot provide enough interaction with a teacher, as well as the Internet is highly addictive and destructive.
First, even though the Internet is a great tool for finding information, it does not completely satisfy the purpose of fundamental education, which is providing a solid knowledge of basic subjects for growing generation. However, this goal can be achieved only through communication with a teacher and active inclusion of a student in the educational process. This is because the Internet is only a storage of the information, while a teacher is literary a guide through the essence of knowledge, helping to the youth to understand a subject, encouraging them to study it in a depth.
In addition, there are plenty distractions on the Internet, such as entertainment sites with games, different forums and videos. As it is known, these kind of resources are may cause an Internet addiction, when a person simply spends hours and hours in front of the screen without any particular reason. Thus, if a child was learning any subject online, he might be easily distracted by mass media as well as become an Internet addict. For instance, today due to the pandemic most of the school children throughout the world are studying online and their parents notice that they tend to play games instead of learning and cannot concentrate on a subject.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that schools lost their potential with the appearance of the Internet because children needs a supervision from a professional, who can help them to gain fundamentals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...rent forums and videos. As it is known, these kind of resources are may cause an Internet ...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who can help them to gain fundamentals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1096345515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95019604307 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0952752976 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.8 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207592040424 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804894531861 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056423711831 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136399746658 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478767654476 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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