Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this era of technology even big names in the universities are enrolling students to the newly launched online courses which are evolving as big surprise to these educational institution as it is hitting right on the targeted students. As the soul purpose of these programmes is for right to education.

Online courses are definitely ,most popular within the remote areas where the youth is unable to attend the university because of the high fee structure and commuting. As this opportunity has widen the career prospects and the flexibility of choosing a course which is according to the interest and experience of the candidate. With this these online programmes are flexible means a student can opt for different days of the week and timings also.

As Education is a right to all , these courses have been designed by imparting a range of curriculum which enhances the subject which are choose by the students , so as to help them with hands on experience to the latest technology with the most well equipped course designed at a very affordable fee structure.

So to conclude , in my opinion the advantages overweight the disadvantages of online courses provided by the universities because they have opened a gateway to successful career prospects.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10144927536 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92104724488 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4621935253 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.857142857 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139484404094 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671850750405 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344680223923 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874970953576 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329206652802 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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