Space exploration costs taxpayers exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?
Enormous amount of taxpayers’ money is being spent on space exploration every year. there are benefits as well as drawbacks associated with space missions.
one of the main advantages of space exploration is that it has provided us with deeper insights into the universe as well as the knowledge of the world we live in. For example, scientists are able to predict weather patterns and natural disasters with the help of satellites. also space missions help the scientists develop new scientific technologies. Test technological innovations have been proved useful not only for astronauts but also for people living on this planet. For instance, gps system, which is used in smart phones and tablets, is developed with the help of satellites. it is also possible to predict natural disasters with the help of satellites.
however, there are also some downsides to exploring and finding out more about the universe. one evident drawback is that it endangers the lives of astronauts. many accidents happened in the past. For example, the challenger space shuttle exploded within minutes of its launch. moreover, billions of dollars are required to build spacecrafts and shuttles. And if the mission fails, the whole of that money is lost.
this is money that could have been used to reduce the sufferings of humans on earth. millions of people still do not have enough to eat. countless others live in refugee camps or in extreme poverty. if even a fraction of the money spent on space research is used for improving the conditions on earth, the world would be a much better place to live in.
To conclude, space research certainly enables us to learn more about the universe and because of this reason it is worth spending money on it. however, spending too much money on space research is not a worthy endeavour because there are more pressing problems on earth. also space missions have a higher risk of failure.Enormous amount of taxpayers’ money is being spent on space exploration every year. there are benefits as well as drawbacks associated with space missions.
one of the main advantages of space exploration is that it has provided us with deeper insights into the universe as well as the knowledge of the world we live in. For example, scientists are able to predict weather patterns and natural disasters with the help of satellites. also space missions help the scientists develop new scientific technologies. These latest technological innovations have been proved useful not only for astronauts but also for people living on this planet. For instance, gps system, which is used in smart phones and tablets, is developed with the help of satellites. it is also possible to predict natural disasters with the help of satellites.
however, there are also some downsides to exploring and finding out more about the universe. one evident drawback is that it endangers the lives of astronauts. many accidents happened in the past. For example, the challenger space shuttle exploded within minutes of its launch. moreover, billions of dollars are required to build spacecrafts and shuttles. And if the mission fails, the whole of that money is lost.
this is money that could have been used to reduce the sufferings of humans on earth. millions of people still do not have enough to eat. countless others live in refugee camps or in extreme poverty. if even a fraction of the money spent on space research is used for improving the conditions on earth, the world would be a much better place to live in.
To conclude, space research certainly enables us to learn more about the universe and because of this reason it is worth spending money on it. however, spending too much money on space research is not a worthy endeavour because there are more pressing problems on earth. also space missions have a higher risk of failure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 13.1623246493 304% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 41.998997996 238% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3239.0 1615.20841683 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 642.0 315.596192385 203% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04517133956 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03365860172 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71738648397 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.266355140187 0.561755894193 47% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1005.3 506.74238477 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
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Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
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Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740262499821 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929620482669 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171143138539 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113951447211 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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