Despite the technological advancement in agriculture, a lot of people indifferent parts of the world are still undernourished. There are so many reasons why this happens, in this essay we can discuss few causes for scarcity of food.
Firstly , poverty and unequal distribution of welth are the major issue behind it. Even in developed countries large population are under hunger index. When we are considering poor countries , they are already unable to meet the requirements of their people. These nations are following old agricultural practices and are unaware of green revolution. They may be still using the ancient equipments and methods . Unavailability of advanced crop varieties and lack of watering facilities are worsening the condition. Lack of money will effect the each and every aspects of food production. Another important problem is related to literacy, uneducated people are neglected and unable to receive the benefits from government.
On the other hand, in case of rich countries still we can see underfeed prole. In some area governmental failure to arrange equal resources are a reason. War and internal conflicts contribute worsening of the condition. Flood and natural calamities distroys a lot of crop yearly also accounted .
When looking forward to preventive measures ,we should keep in mind that the production and distribution should be monitored . Advanced technology and crops are to be used. There should be all facilities nourishing plants should be available. Overall we all should have a passion in cultivation and helping the hunger people. This is the responsibility of the society to fed the poor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36964980545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05569572806 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8130963544 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6315789474 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5263157895 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208195374514 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517565099239 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592244717619 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125134402627 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867529428983 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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