Juvenile crimes are showing an increasing trend along with the modernised world; there is an ongoing argument that these people should be punished as same as the adults. Personally I have a mixed opinion, while punishing for the crimes the underlying situation should be taken in account.
Firstly, school going age is the transition stage from young to adult, these age groups are highly fragile minded and can be influenced by all methods like social media and the community around them. In order to satisfy the present needs they are doing robberies and other crimes, most of them are not aware of the consequences of their deeds. Punishing children will make them alerted about the good and bad and need to behave properly in the community. Fear of punishments can prevent crimes effectively up to an extent; for example if a child is stealing nighbours home frequently, can stop these deeds if he is counciled about the punishment he will recieve if he comm it again.
On the otherhand, punishments can make some cholden more bad in their acts, they are become resistant and will do worst deeds. Familial and social influences affects the activities of the pupil largely, hence correcting the malfunctioning in community can make big benefits to young people. There should be provision of proper education and guidance, councilin for the one who commit crimes will be beneficial. Simply punishing the pupil can't be fruitfull, best approach is correcting the deviation of the youngsters.
Overall, punishing the pupil doing mis takes though sounds good, it has lot of adverse affects to the community and the individual. Proper correctify of the underlying causes and gudance to the child can change the situation widely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding community'?
Suggestion: the surrounding community
...ed by all methods like social media and the community around them. In order to satisfy the present needs ...
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Suggestion:
...rimes, most of them are not aware of the consequences of their deeds. Punishing c...
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Message: Did you mean 'provisioned'?
Suggestion: provisioned
...nefits to young people. There should be provision of proper education and guidance, counc...
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Suggestion:
...proper education and guidance, councilin for the one who commit crimes will be be...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... beneficial. Simply punishing the pupil cant be fruitfull, best approach is correcti...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...ly punishing the pupil cant be fruitfull, best approach is correcting the deviation of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69268470838 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8178198737 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204115783885 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732273110115 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587015595146 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124734591503 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646424225854 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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